If this poem was based on somethin u really went through i am sry and hope u can get through but i loved the poem i could feel the pain and how i would feel if my boyfriend did that to me 5/5

Very good! It really got the messege across! no confusing metaphors! thanx 4 the comments!

Jerbear*

Yeah i totally agree with charissa, if this was something you really went through.... i liked it anyway, iy was good!