Steph. One word. WOW. You really pinned point this one. I could feel what you were feeling. It was just beautiful. And it will get easier, In time. Stay strong and keep your head up. I'm positive Derek would love all the things you have been doing, These two poems, All the things on myspace. He would love it.

5/5 Though, This was truely beautiful. Really.

Love ya.

`Taleee xx

This poem really really got to me. It's so sweet.
And i know you've probably heard it a million times but it oes get easy, after a while you only think of the goo dthings and not the bad and dont ever ever be afraid to cry because it takes away the pain. If you didnt cry youd be even moe of a wreck. He is always looking over you and he loves you just as much as you love him.
It hurts so bad when the good die young, some of my poems are about my friend Ollie and if you read them you'll see that i felt just like you do at the time.
If you ever need anything i'm here

Aw...thats so sad. Tears are welling up in my eyes, it completely broke my heart. Great job I'm sure he would've thought so too. Take care.

xoxoxo Haley

I didnt know him but I am sure he would have loved it. your writing does him and yourself proud. this was really brilliant. keep it up.

xox

This poem and the other are both sincerely sad but they are both wonderful poems. Writing about a lost friend is one of the hardest things to do, but it'll help. It's good that you can't write about it! Good job on the poem!

Ariana

Awww, shivers and tears. this is such a great poem. you have expressed so much hurt and loss in it and i just wanted to give you a big cuddle and say you will pull through this. yuor right he is always with you and he is your angel watching over you every where you go and he will protect you forever. your one in a million for writing, never forget that xxxxxxx