This is an incredible poem, definatly deserving of winning first place. I love the way your words always seem to move me, a wonderful flow and amazing poem ^_^

Beautifully done my friend.

Excellent rictameter form. Good job Simon. Thanks for commenting on my Red Baron poem.
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

Wow Simon! This poem is amazing. The choice of words you used were beautiful. I especially loved this part:
"Lead me to your shocking deep blue ocean."