Comments : Who I've Become

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, i loved it, keep writing, you are so talented
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job i like the flow of this one didnt seem pushed or anything it seem like it was from the heart keep it up 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Its strong and meaningful. Many people change without realizing it and even i change and will not like the outcome but its how we become "us" i guess. Its hard, point well taken, written in amazing ways! Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    I think alot of people can relate to this. Everyone wishes to turn back time and take it all away... and you expressed it well! I liked the rhyme schemes, they were good. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good also... It's something that many people can relate to. It had a good flow and really kept my attention. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Mmkay, This is getting strange. I can relate to this one aswell. >.< Hmm. Lol.

    Another really great poem though. Had a good meaning behind it. Loved it. 5/5

    And do you know if you're getting your other account back?

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Very easy to relate to , makes you think a lttle as well, very nice to read and think about

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This is a really good poem, and I'm sure a lot of people can relate. We would all like to go back in time.