by Tara Kay
Wow, i loved it, keep writing, you are so talented |
by firexflys
Nice job i like the flow of this one didnt seem pushed or anything it seem like it was from the heart keep it up 5.5 |
by Chelsea
Its strong and meaningful. Many people change without realizing it and even i change and will not like the outcome but its how we become "us" i guess. Its hard, point well taken, written in amazing ways! Keep it up! |
by MemoirsOfMe
I think alot of people can relate to this. Everyone wishes to turn back time and take it all away... and you expressed it well! I liked the rhyme schemes, they were good. Keep it up! |
by Bridgette
This is really good also... It's something that many people can relate to. It had a good flow and really kept my attention. Great job! |
by Natalie
Mmkay, This is getting strange. I can relate to this one aswell. >.< Hmm. Lol. |
by Oceansoul
Very easy to relate to , makes you think a lttle as well, very nice to read and think about |
by Darien
This is a really good poem, and I'm sure a lot of people can relate. We would all like to go back in time. |