Good, and i could get the tune, or somewhat in my head and it made it easier to read
well done

Great lyrics...they are really amazing...i enjoyed reading this so much...it had a nice flow which kept it together so well...Great job...
Emma 5/5

"Sometimes I just wish I could,
Start everything all over again.
Turn back time,
And make all the wrong right.
Make things the way I want them to be,
Want them to be for me."

i know i wish i could nice job keep up the amazing work 5,5

I really liked this! The structure was really good and it flowed smoothly. Some of those lines in there were great, and the expressions. Nicely Done!

Awesome job. The ending, repeating what you had said at the begining really brought closer and stregth to what you were saying! Keep up the writing, I enjoy reading yours!

This is really good.. I loved this. The flow and rhythm was really good and held up well.. this would definitely make a great song. I loved it. You did a great job on this!

Another very good poem! it had excellent emotion and a great flow.. and i for one, cant wait to hear it as a song! :P nice write! 5/5

I wish this too. And today, I've realised so much. I wont go into that. Anywho, Another really grea peice, Would love to hear this too music. It would definetly become a hit tehe. Awesome job 5/5 =P

`taleee xx

Gr8 poem...gr8 rythmeto it. there's something everyone gos through. life is hard, but u're strug. u can tell it. keep wirting:)

You should put some indication to what the Verses are, what the Chorus is and if you have a bridge or interlude, just so it helps. Good stuff though.

Another well written poem.. i enjoyed it.. it flowed well, the descriptions were pretty good, and you really poured your heart and soul into it.. nice job! 5/5

Wow! yer such a great writter! that really captured something inside me, ya know?

As a poem it wouldn't be perfect, but as lrics they are touching and lovely!!! 5/5