Poem Soul.

by sfiawong   May 27, 2006


Poem Soul.
By: sfiawong

Ah! Curious! Curious!
The vernacular poetry in history becomes a century.

How came? Why?
Still has not surpassed the ancient poetry,
This originally not enough meant words.
Old does not go, is new does not come.

Poem nautical mile several dead bodies,
On poem road more than several new corpses!
Alas! You are the poet?
Please do not have less advanced to step on.
He will possibly be the future poet.
You randomly step on then are the murderer,
Such tramples are jealous of other rival success!

Does not assist the new person,
It is not your crime.
He wants to lord over the poem country.
But the poetic world has become the desert.
Again long does not sprout free verse written in the vernacular,
This is you hopes?

The irrigation is the holly god duty,
You have not poured water on,
If not your applying fertilizer!
What can the poetic world turn?

(Notes: This poem was written for the Chinese/Western poet's attention. There is some serious problem inside the poetry kingdom itself. Wishing this poem may give the Chinese poets a little reminder or advice!)

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  • 18 years ago

    by David Wallace

    I had 2 give this poem a perfect 5 despite the bad ratings this poem was gettin because many didnt try to vizualize what u were tryin to say. very well written and beautifully organized

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    The roots of poetry may be hazed, but not forgotten. Like a tree, it has many branches, what we see is above the earth, but hidden under the soil, lies the roots of the tree, the tree that gives poetry life. It's good you keep your Chinese values, rather than conforming to Western Society.

  • 18 years ago

    by sfiawong

    Welcome members/friends to make frank critique on this poem, and also want all of you can understand this poem and follow its hints for the poetry field. Go to plant your piece of poetry garden, let it haing gotten prosperous again as good as the ancient poetry world.

    sfiawong.

  • 18 years ago

    by sfiawong

    Hi Chelsea,

    I am glad to har that you like my poetry, and wishing you to enjoy my other pieces, which I believe you can find another better ones

    Thank you for your reasonable comments.

    sfiawong.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Ive never read anything like it........ I LOVE IT! I see what you are getting at and the way you say it is extremely powerful! Im heading to read more of yours!

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