Thats pretty dope. I liked the part when you said
'See that is why I'm silent,
Taking all this pain,
For every time I see you,
It washes away again'
anyways, good job. Keep it up
*~*BrokenTessa*~*

Nice poem i liked it a lot the flow was good keep up the good work 5.5

...breathtakin hun i kno exactly how u feel i hearts it soo much babes *hugss*