Further - Beyond

Its good but the flow gets a little funny closer to the end. but its good

I liked this poem because it shows your unique creativity and deep thoughts. good job.

Whoa. Deep...lol. Nice poem. It was short, but to the point. I liked all the deep and dark emotion in this. It really brought out the poem, itself. You have a unique writing style too. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I liked this poem but i couldnt understand it at all lol but the rhythm and all that was exellent :):):)

xxx alex xxx

Wow-very deep.....kool wording.

october xx