Wow deep lots going on in this poem i love depressing poems i dont know why but i do 5/5 xoxroxyxox

I like this poem, but the flow is a littleb it off, and i can't seem to picture this in my head.
Other than that it is really good.

Sign Angel.

Confusing, but oddly beautiful

Wow-very deep.....kool wording.

october xx

I liked this poem but i couldnt understand it at all lol but the rhythm and all that was exellent :):):)

xxx alex xxx

Whoa. Deep...lol. Nice poem. It was short, but to the point. I liked all the deep and dark emotion in this. It really brought out the poem, itself. You have a unique writing style too. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I liked this poem because it shows your unique creativity and deep thoughts. good job.

Its good but the flow gets a little funny closer to the end. but its good