This was really good.. The only advice I would give would to take the "to" out of the last sentence of the third stanza.. the flow would work better that way. But other than that this is a raelly good poem and I can definitely relate to it. Another good poem :)

OMG. This is kinda how I've been feeling lately. I can relate to everything in this poem.

Everything was so good. Really good write. 5/5 =P

`taleee xx

I love the message of this poem, how things used to be and how sometimes you wish you could return to that.

I've been feeling like that lately, and you described every thought perfectly.

Great job! 5/5

That was lovely and it was true and somethin i can really relate to.
well done my friend.
keep writing and take care
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Really beautiful poem, it's so completely heartfelt and I think thats what makes it so relateable. I quite often feel the same way, but I guess that everything that happens makes us who we are, and so I don't think I'd change anything to be honest. Anyway, I stray from the point. Good poem =P Loved it. 5/5 x

Who doesnt want to go back.....it's a great way of expressing what so many want in their lives,
loved it

I really like the first verse. That definitely connected with me. The rest of the poem was really good. Keep writing!

... I liked your poem it was good... I think it's on a human level and any and everyone can relate... good job.... and anyone who is going through that rough patch wishes they can go back

Wow.. that was so beautiful, and i could really relate! it flowed well, and it was really heartfelt.. loved it! excellent work! 5/5

Such a beautiful message it felt powerful and really came from the heart, easy to relate to too

Sondos

This poem is wonderful. I think this one is a bit dull, like that you are begging for the old times to return, but it is very true and I agree.

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So true So true...I would kill to go back to those times! 5/5! Great poem, i really enjoyed it. a bit of an awkward flow occasionally but wonderful all the same!

Great job! 5/5

Dont stop writing you have a wonderful talent.

I enjoyed this one, it flowed well and carried a pang of regret with a chance for redemption.

Did you die or something? lol.. sorry, but i dont understand why you wish you could go back and thank them.. nice poem.. the flow was good.. although, some lines you rhymed and some you didnt.. i liked the comparisons between the past and present.. good job! 5/5

Would it not be nice if we really could go back..........great poem nice topic to it is really different and original! Please read four of mine as said in the forum try to add in rose colored glasses

You are a really good writer, this is a very true poem and i can relate to it so much. i'm glad you liked my poem "you are simply amazing" i've written more about 70 or around there and i just wanted to say thanks for commenting and voting.

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sherise-

This was a good poem...i didnt quite catch the flow but i deffinatly got what it was saying and all the emotions you put into it!!..=D 5/5 ...Good write!!

I loved this poem... and i can really really relate to it! great write! well done

Love
Jacs
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This is so.. God there isn't a word! Everything really does get harder, more complicated. I can totally relate and this poem is dripping with strong emotion! 5/5 all the way