This is an outstanding poem, truly.I love the title-very unique.I also like how you use a double rhyme in each stanza(except the 2nd stanza-it kinda interupts the flow with singing and playing, yet it doesn't really detract anything from the poem)and the rhyme scheme works so well, not at all cliched as most rhyming pieces tend to be..But it is the emotion that captures one upon reading it-this is a beautiful poem of love.Great poem.