Your Soul

by vika   May 28, 2006


I often wondered why doi i love you,
i don't know but the answers are still quite a few.
i don't understand what drove me carzy,
but when i think about getting your love, why does my future look so hazy?

were they your deep see like eyes, or the gentle way you talk,
was it your shining smile, or your confident walk?
was it the understanding way you answered a question,
or was it eh way you helped people get rid of their apprehension.
was it the way you looked at me that night,
or was it the way your thoughts made every thing so right.

was it your inocent face,
or the way you made my blood race.
was it because when you were around i don't have control over my heart or mind,
or was it because you were just one of a kind.

i still don't know why i love you
i understand i love you blindly, but what i was doing i never knew.
i still don't know why,
what make me tell myself a lie!
maybe it was my heart, that could never make a mistake,
it saw your soul, which was crystal clear, like a lake.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Excellent poem! very deep, very emotional, great flow, and wonderful use of words! i loved itt! just a few spelling errors, and a bit of trouble with tenses, but you can fix them by reading over it! wonderful write! 5/5