Curtains Drawn

by ratchild666   May 28, 2006


Curtains drawn, we take a bow
Audience echoing why and how
All the hope lost all too fast
Thrown expertly into the past

You won't be asking how I am
Or keeping to my master plan
You'll be asking how the new ones are
Where they've been, how long, or far

Watch them dance upon the stage
That we once graced on a previous page
Forget the screenplay and the lines
Heckled scenes and difficult times

Unconvincing, there I sat
Next to you, but always just that
Never closer and nothing more
Just me and myself walk out the door

Now I have to learn to live
And keep all that I want to give
While you forget and then pretend
And I remember you're just a friend

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  • 18 years ago

    by x..BeautyInTheBreakdown..x

    I love this poem!! So good!! xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Hey, tried too add on myspace but tis all hard. :) Anyways, mine is blah di blar usual, then shop girl 119 {no spaces} -if u even want too-

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Now I have to learn to live
    And keep all that I want to give''-

    I cut n pasted so many various lines then. lol. But i love *waves hand in upward motion* that, because it's just... striking. 'Keep all that I want to give''.
    Like i said, Striking. *eyes shine*

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xUnbreakablex

    My god u have a way with words! this is my favourite uv written so far well done stef. n it duz do it justice xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Amazing job the flow was wonderful keep up the good work 5.5

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