Oh, I read this. You entered the same contest as me =D Taha. Buuuuut. I liked it. Speshly the 2nd stanza. Just the way you worded it, It sounds somewhat interesting.A very good poem. Enjoyed reading it =P Hope all goes good in the contest! 5/5

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Wow! what an amazing poem! it had excellent language, a great rhyme scheme, and so many brilliant metaphors! wow.. this definetly deserves a 5/5!

This is anexceptional piece. I love imagery, and there's just so much here. And it's of a good quality. I can't think of a single piece or critism either. It's well written, very creative, you've used a wide of vocabulary. I can't fault it.x

Excellent. I love work like this. Amazing, the picture it painted in my head was amazing. You are very, very talented!! ;)

Lovely poem Sondos. I know I have not read much of your work, but I can tell you I enjoyed this poem. The rhymes and flow were great. The details and imagery were amazing. This is a really nice piece of work.

Good job

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Well, well, well, Congradulations to this poem in my contest. Beautiful job!