Great poem! A very sad story to read through... 5/5 all the way!

Thanks for the comment on my poem glad someone enjoyed it. Beautifully written by the way keep up the good worK! =)

5/5

Kay

Wow. That was really, really...

really good. It was so sad though. But it's really good to know that it's all worked out in the end... I really like peoms that tell a long story like this one!

5/5 hands down.

Ey darl . that was really beautiful . the day you guys get married tell me.. i'd like to congratulate u's .lol. but yea. it was a raelly good poem. nice work

anasha . x