A message for you all

I don't think this poem puts the point across of what I'm trying to say very well? That no1 is alone and that we should help others more.. tell me what you think.
Thanks alot, katie x x x

A message for all you people hurting out there,
don't think that you're all alone, someone cares.
I'm holding out my hand, ready to pull you close,
through the storm we'll see are rainbows.

Don't shut the persistent pain and rage inside,
however powerful emotions shouldn't be denied.
Never hold onto hurt, let it fly free.
Show the world you are who you want to be.

Only in poems can I truly speak my mind
Even in these words the truth I try to hide
Words cannot express the torture I endure
The pressure on my heart, feelings so impure.

Everyone in the world has there story to declare
Listen, hear there words, show that you care
People are just people, we all have are masks
I want to stop the cover up, move on from the past

We have secrets, lies we've told, no one is perfect
Don't be afraid to show your inner conflict.
Feel a breath of fresh air as you realise your not alone.
Even if you hate your life, keep searching for a place called home.