Even-Keeled (Nonet)

by Sean Dohr   May 28, 2006


Pollen touches the tip of my nose,
legs weaken, testosterone flows.
The smell makes my passion grow,
if only you could know.
How it makes me feel,
so even-keeled.
Feelings so
surreal.
Chill.

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  • Great Job, like ~*Who Cares?*~ said it was short but crammed full of details!!! Very good Job!! I like the form of poetry you used!!! Very nice Job.. Couldnt change a thing!! 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Nice job, reminds me of something else...lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow short yet crammed full of details. 5/5
    #2

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    This really shows your connection with Nature. I liked you you expressed it... it was just, great. Nothing more, nothing less, it was just Perfect. A vivid imagination of what you are describing... nicely done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Deep
    congratualtions on coming 1st in my comp.
    youre a very talented writer i can see from your work that its well thought and well constructed together, with meaning and you use these qualities in each of the pieces ive already read.
    i seem to think ive read or heard of your name befor....hmmm

    well keep up your great pieces of art and ill continue to read
    ~Emma
    5/5