So hard , makes one shiver when reading, jst a sad thing that in propably is reality to often
very well done

Sad story. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this one. Good ending too. Even though I don't believe suicide is the right answer. (but i do write about it, to show how stupid it is)

This poem expresses well the fact that acceptance is the key. You also hit your target of darkness,,in other words it is a dark poem and that is what you wre aiming for

This is so sad and powerful, it really pulls the reader in and doesn't let them out! i love the last stanza, its just so intense! amazing write! 5/5

That is so sad..mostly because it really happens

It was like she wasn't real,
Like no one could see her,
Maybe she was dead?
Only dead on the inside...

this was my favorite verse!!!!! this was great... and i could definately relate... i would feel the poem the whole way through and you definately kept my attention the whole way thru 5/5 -Jen-