I really like that you didnt rhyme so much. I have been trying not to do it so much either.This is a wonderful poem!!! I can relate, unfortunatly there is always the losing part...! Love IT~!
ashley b

This is the truest poem. Love is hurtful, and yet we still miss it when it's gone. I really like the scheme that you used to write this.

Your Poem is very nice. I havent heard many good poems without rhyming and I thought it was good how you put it together, even what you had to say was true. Good Job! LiL One

I AGREE WITH LIL ONE USUALLY I LIKE POEMS THAT RHYME AND IT`S HARD TO FIND ONE THAT DOESN`T RHYME THATS GOOD BUT THIS IS REALLY GREAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

A great discription of a game we all love to hate.

wonderful poem. you have great talent. keep up the good work!

Ashley

great job! ive read others youve written but am pressed for time right now so i didnt comment. you have a ton of talent and should really keep writting. again great job!