There was once a time

by Neil   May 28, 2006


There was a time,
I met a girl,
I fell in love,
In so little time.

She was not that great,
Silly, clumsy and fine,
Cute, deadly and fun,
Even so we had our date.

Had laughs and tears.
Problems and joy.
None ever mattered,
For she scared away my fears.

I sit here and cry, Wondering,
What happened to us?
I shed tears missing you,
Will I see you again?

Copyright Neily J

~This Poem was written in memory of my first love, she died...~

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  • 18 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Goodness, that was such a beautiful poem. I'm so very sorry to hear about your loss. I hope you are healing well, for something as tragic as that can damage a person more than anything. But still, a wonderful poem that's brought deep inspiration to me. Thank you. 5/5

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

  • 18 years ago

    by NATALIE

    I really liked this poem but it was kinda sad remember im here if you need me ok love ya bye

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awww hunnie thats so sad
    i cant belive it hun
    xoxroxyxox nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    Omg, that was sad, but good

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Beautiful piece
    im very sorry
    i love your work
    thank you for everything
    love
    ~Emma

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