Bravo on even finishing one of these. I'm having the hardest time writing one.
I liked this one, though the song is now stuck in my head...ugh!
Love ya~Holly

Hey, I really enjoyed this one. Its soemthing new and I learned something ;) I "think" I might try one now.....i doubt itll come out as good as yours though lol

What a poem

This was great ! I once came across this type of poem on a poetry site and thought to myself this would be such a fun style to try .
I began one and that was as far as I got with it ......
This one deserves nothing less than a 5 . A very difficult type of poem to write yet you have done such an incredible job on it !!!

Wonderful write !