Wow, i hv been waiting to see this one online & i m glad to find it....as even i told u...the ending is really great, others do agree with me.. :o)
very nice poem dear, sorrow could be felt in every corner.
all the best and take care
5/5

THIS IS GREAT I LOVED IT HAVE NEVER READ ANYTHING THAT IS THIS GOOD BEFORE KEEP WRITING.5/5

Aww thats sad...and it like i can't explain....it was strong i could tell you weren't in the happiest moods...i think it was very good

No rise like sun and live your day burrying the past behind and seek the pleasure of your day. a very deep poem and very special

love

This is great

It's very thoughtful really... So much of what i feel... I'm so happy that you've written this poem... Seems you're talking from my point of view! It's really great Ipsita!