by ~5*seconds*ago~ May 29, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Laying on her death bed |
Great Job this is another wonderful poem u have witten!! I really love your work you are very talented!! Great flow and rhyme!! Very touching!!! 5/5!! |
by LadyPearl
Yipee!!, another poem from my contest. Wonderful job, very touching |
Gr8 poem...gr8 wording and details...5/5 |