Good poem, seems like your thoughts laid out on paper. 5/5

Baby this is also i good one but it still scares me when you write like this

Hey , i really liked this poem. I liked the repetition and power behind it. Very well writen and thoughful.

kate xx

I know the poems called thje...but you could've put it in occasionaly and still drawn otu your point, all the the's took away from the meaning of the poem and distracts teh reader. Nice poem though.

ur sis
lissa