Starving Herself Beautiful

by AllCutUp   May 29, 2006


So she starts another day
on a empty stomach
a sore head
and bloody wrists
Her mind concentrated
on avoiding his attention- he cant see her like this
As the days go by
the kgs shed
shes left with nothing but
Her scars, memory's and a tear stained face
The dark circles under her eyes are
covered by concealer
shes sleep deprived
and determined on starving herself beautiful
Cutting herself to sleep everynight
is this how it has to end?
all because you decided you didn't love her anymore?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Beca

    Wow. im really glad you named it what you did because i was expecting something incredible and it really was. eating disorders affect so many ppl and u dont even realize it. things that bring it on are usually the things that make u slit too so its kind like it all goes together, and its true. ive been down that road along with most other people. i cant believe what guys make girls do to themselves. anyways, awesome as always:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Amirah

    Hey this is really good! Thank you for the comment on my poem I'm givin' this one 5/5 too, don't give up on writin' you have a talent :D! -Amirah

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is my favorite. Sounds completley like me. I know I've said twice already I can relate and it sounds like me.. But this one is by far my favorite and the most like me. It's kind of scary this one because I can relate to it so much. Definitely adding you to my favorites!

  • Hey great poem, keep up the great work, xoxo mel

  • 18 years ago

    by alana

    O wow
    this is amazing poem..
    kinda how i feel..
    great work keep it up
    always alana