"Please Kill Me"

I actually got a sheet of paper out and wrote that down by the capitals you subtly put in there.

At first i had mistaken it for just typos, but you don't seem like the type to make a lot of those. So, I figured it out and now I feel smart, lol!!!

Really, that was extraordinary. Really insightful and opinionated in a good way though. I liked it!

Another great piece.
very very very good
flowed very nicely
And the meaning presented polished it off quite nicely.
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Nice poem, and no, i will not kill you. you are taking everything good for granted and focusing on teh bad. turn taht frown upside down! (That's not an upside down frown! that's a smile!! work on that too) Lol
-suz

I welcome awareness! Good right, it makes a person think abit! 5/5

Wow, a nice style, i really like how nicely you did this, congrates. 5/5 from me