Hey,
I thought this was a well written poem, it wasn't one of the best but, i loved the story itslelf...
Keep writing.

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Tristan

Wow, you write so well i love the story. i know how that feels to lose someone keep up the good work and in time it will get easyer.

I loved the part about somebody finding the necklace and wondering whos it was and how it got there because I think about those kind of things often. it was a beautiful story...u should write books