End Of Eternity

Nitin
This poem is so heart wrenching. It is so nice to know how much things have changed.

Did you notice that man with a bleeding chest?
seems as if he is searching for something somewhere
digging inside his own flesh to find the remaining best
of the words he ever uttered as his last prayer

Such a vivid image this portrays.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Excellent job on this poem. Loved the word choices.

if life is meant to breakdown
then forever let my knees kiss the ground
if from me love is all you expect
then wail till silent agony makes a sound

This stanza was really great!
Love your friend Cindy

Wow! This has a lot of very deep feelings. Excellent job and word choice. The reader can feel the sadness dripping from your words! Great job! Bravo!

Look at that man pretending to be so nice
with all that fake smile all around his face
and the tears he hides paying the price
for it seems as if he has lost his life's race

-somewhere this man thrives in every soul....

wonderfully written!

regards
purva

Woah this one is AMAZING its really deep and i can really relate.

Could you see him falling within his own eyes
he has been like this since the end of eternity
wonder why only i could hear his silent cries?
may be only he knows what its like to be me

thoes are really great lines...