Great job!!! i love it!! 10/5

Wow, this is amazing, really gd!!! =D

Yep, I have to agree with the above people. This was truely brillant. Loved it from start to finish. Great write! 5/5

`taleee xx

Beautiful!
absolutely beautiful! very well written and the meanings are soo nice!
just check out this tiny Grammar mistake "Did you noticed"
the poem is wonderful don't worry! you're my inspiration =D
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Hey darl great j0b with this. very well ritten great use 0f w0rds. xx

l0ve fr0m
dOra

Nicely done ur words once again fit well toegther and make this piece what it is xox me

Amazing , brilliantly written .The emotions are so evident ,excellent.

'digging inside his own flesh to find the remaining best
of the words he ever uttered as his last prayer'

Brilliantly written. Once again I'm speechless. I've noticed that you put your heart and soul in to your dark poems, only then you can make the readers feel them in their souls. Keep up the brilliant work.

Love
Michelle

Interguing and digging insde is the poem.really meaningful if read carefully.

love

Amazing.....i m lacking the words to praise ur work....u consider excellent 4 all.
u still hav that pinch in ur sad poems as b4.

My only critique is the lack of punctuation. I understand some poems are written on open form, but periods and commas add elegance

I think you will find that many people know what it is like to be in pain, to be dying inside out as it were. To have lost so much of life that living it seems pointless and almost cruel, that death would be liberating because you feel so numb and dead already. It is a hard place to be in life, and it takes real courage to get past it, and become okay again. Often help from other sources is helpful, and it is always worth a shot. Like they say, once you have hit rock bottom the only way to go is up, if you fail again, you are still at the bottom so you can only improve your curcomstances from that point. Good luck, and a very well constructed poem.

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow, that was amazing. I haven't read such an amazing poem like this one for a while. Great job... I can relate to it. 5/5

~ Tina

@...This poem is brilliant...so much hidden meaning and sorrow...it gave ma a slight chill when i read it..Absolutly wonderful poem=0)...@
luv, Lisa

Hmmnnn, great poem, got me thinking. thats deep.

So beautifull, hope ur alrite

Very nicely written in deed. One of my favorites that I've read in awhile. Never quit writing and take care.

*> : PainOfOne [blaine]

H'omg

Utter Brilliance. You've got talent... so easily used. be sure to let it be known to the world. Love your work. Keanna

Woah this one is AMAZING its really deep and i can really relate.

Could you see him falling within his own eyes
he has been like this since the end of eternity
wonder why only i could hear his silent cries?
may be only he knows what its like to be me

thoes are really great lines...