Hey Emily!!!!
thankyou sooooooooo much for all the comments!!! they mean so much :D. I don't mind being called rosy :P it's quite a compliment actually, cus i would sell my soul to be able to write like her......well maybe not my soul....but i would sell my trainers! and they are nice trainers aswell!!!

i never knew you were such an ace poet!!! i love this one. it's dark and chilling...my favourite!!!! *chirps*

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...................!!!! this is such a breathtaking poem! ive never read anything soo berautiful, i cant quite belive it! its soo filled with emotions and soo lingering and poiniant. and the images youve used! .....! write more!
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Im going to comment on this one again!!!! its proably my favourite poem written by anyone. i just love the language and the totally origonal images youve used! its amazing
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Wow!! its so expressive the way u repeat the words 3 times in every 2nd line of each stanza... its like an echo of someone's screams...