The pain of love

by arietty   May 29, 2006


I want to lose this love of mine
It's ruining my life
The cruel twists inside me
Cutting like a knife

I wish I could turn back the clock
To when I was young and sweet
No feelings to bother me
No hurts to make me bleat

Love is cruel
When no-one loves you back
It twists your soul in two,
Tortures like the rack

I need to let these feelings out
Before I die within
These feelings, they are hurting me
But I have committed no sin

For loving you is easy
But hiding it is not
O the pain of loving you
Serenades my shot

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    You did a very good job here.
    Your emotions were pouring out with every word and the vocabulary and metaphors were amazing.
    Wonderful job on this one, keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Hey i thought this poem was really good. You put a lot of emotion into it and I hope everything works out.

    well done

    dave x

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Hey i thought this poem was really good. You put a lot of emotion into it and I hope everything works out.

    well done

    dave x