Hey i thought this poem was really good. You put a lot of emotion into it and I hope everything works out.

well done

dave x

Hey i thought this poem was really good. You put a lot of emotion into it and I hope everything works out.

well done

dave x

Wow.
You did a very good job here.
Your emotions were pouring out with every word and the vocabulary and metaphors were amazing.
Wonderful job on this one, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie