Awesome job. 5/5

I really like this-love can be so wonderful and yet so heartbreaking and you have captured the sadness here so very well and eloquently-so much emotion.I know I, and many others can relate to the sentiments you have expressed here.A very touching piece.I love the title and using it as the last line really gives the piece impact.
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Gary J

Really good! keep it up =D

I really really liked this. I, aswell as many many others I'm sure, have had atleast one write like this or maybe just attempted at it. I was never happy with the way my feelings came out though. However, as odd as it may seem, now that I have read your piece, it's as if my thoughts have come out of someone elses hand. You wrote exactly what I've always needed to say. For that reason, mostly I will come by here again to read some more of your writes - become even more inspired... I have been away from my writing life for awhile now, so all I have to show for myself are older pieces posted up. Though, now that I have had quite the break, I find myself inspired in a much stronger way than usual - and this poem made agreat difference.I'm off to write, and maybe when I get home I'll post them. :). Anyway, the point is, I want to say thankyou: for helping me understand my own thinking, and also for waking up the writer in me.

.......so true, so true.......

But what about, if you don't get it, do you miss it?....You know what I mean......

Poem is 5/5 and more
if you don't take chances then
why live. life;s just that a chance.
when love comes knocking you
better answer.

I adore this poem! It speaks a very powerful truth about one of the most important aspects of life: love. Love can be both good and bad. Losing it is the hardest thing. But what you do not have, you can not lose. And if you never have it, you can never truly be happy. The poem beautifully portrays a very prominent dilema if life. Fantastic