Despiration

Nice poem, interesting format. The only part I disliked was the last line, it seemed a bit out of place the first time I read through, and I had to re-read the poem before it semmed to even remotely 'fit in'. Other than that, really great poem, well written indeed.

Peace. [Sole]

This poem was well written I think. If you ask me, poetry is not about how much "emotion" or the quantity even. It is your perspective on a situation, something that noone else can decide for you. 5/5

Absolutely awesome, i loved it, it was so beautiful, so...careful (if you know what i mean)
well done my friend

Aw Thats so sweet! Great work, i loved reading it, it's one of the better love poems I've read in a while.

But in this line "wishing you where not alone" shouldn't it be "were" instead of "where"

Anyways, great job and thanks for the comment on mine.

--Steph

I really liked this poem, brought back memories of when me and my ex split, and although I'd give anything to not relive that, it gives me a sense of relief knowing I'm not the only one going through this, i guess. I really liked this and I think that you did a great job on it. 5/5