Atonement

by Fallengod667   May 29, 2006


I'm so confused.
I'm so alone.
Is This the way
I must atone?

My minds destroyed
Ive lost control.
Is this the way
I must atone?

Things in my past.
Things down the road.
Is this the way
I must atone?

My bodies gone.
My hearts so cold.
Is this the way
I must atone?

My smiles fake.
Emotions sold.
Is this the way.
I must atone?

I don't know how.
I must give in.
To set things right,
To cleanse my sins.

I MUST ATONE!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...This was such a good poem. I felt you used so many things to get your point across. I love how simple the style is. Very nice work. Nik

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Totally true! Well you know waht ima say so ~peace out~ ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    Wow, amazing. I loved every word and the repition of i must atone worked perfectly. Well done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ren

    Oh, wow! This poem is sooo good! I can tell you wrote from the heart and your word choice is great! Wonderful!! Loved it! 5/5 all the way! If you keep writing, I'll keep reading!

    Much love!

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