Oh, wow! This poem is sooo good! I can tell you wrote from the heart and your word choice is great! Wonderful!! Loved it! 5/5 all the way! If you keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Much love!

Wow, amazing. I loved every word and the repition of i must atone worked perfectly. Well done 5/5

Totally true! Well you know waht ima say so ~peace out~ ^_^

Wow...This was such a good poem. I felt you used so many things to get your point across. I love how simple the style is. Very nice work. Nik