Bliss

by Tiny Reader   May 29, 2006


If all the smiles you gave me
Were smiled all as one
I would have the energy
To heat the entire sun.

If every time you touched me,
I saved the feeling in a jar
I would store the feeling
Of floating to a star.

It's all the times you kissed me
And all the things you say
That keep me warm and happy
While you are far away.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    Your poem's so sweet, each stanza is so beautiful. My favorite stanza was the first one, and the ending line is the sweetest.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    That was absolutely beutiful. It's seriously my new favorite poem of the moment. I love the pure, child like emotion in this. AWESOME poem!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    So beautiful

    -stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by Summer

    Thanks for the bvote & comment, the one you picked was worth 2 :)
    I loved the idea for this poem, and it actually means a little something to mean cause my b/f of a 1 year and 2 months will be going away to college soon 5/5

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