It made perfect sense to me :) and I think that it was very good! I liked the storyline a lot, good work *thumbsup*
Keep up the writing!! 5/5

Baby girl that was A-MAZING!!!! One of the best ive ever read in my entire life no joke.

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sierra i envy your ability, and weep for your fearrs, ill hold all your pain, and cry all your tears, and no matter where you go in this life, ill be sure to follow, in body spirit and mind, all around the world, ill be close behhind, from every scrape, to every scar, be sure to look and i wotn be far....

yay!

i luv you so much baby!!!!!!!!!

stay strong!!!!!!!!!

This is effing long, you ho.

Hahahahha. Just kidding... God, you're amazing...

:)

Car

Wow that was really long but something amazingly perfect in it made me read on until the end. I loved it Sierra. Don't I love all your poems? For some reason there is nothing you lack in making a masterpiece everytime your pen hits a sheet. Good work as always. 5/5