by Sean Dohr May 30, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I am going to paint a picture, |
by sibyllene
Haha, what? the beginning was reminded me of being about 10, riding around with bikes and exploring, then the pot-smoking hippies totally threw me off. so... i think this is meant to be funny..... : D |
by IfIhide11
I think you did perfect on your rhyming and the ending was just fine. You wrote this poem perfectly. No matter what people will say. Your an great writer and don't forget that. |
by Moose
Wow, I usually dont like anything about nature and envoirment, but I gotta tell ya, this was a great poem. |
by LadyPearl
Beautiful poem. Great rhythm and a nice hint of humor in the poem. |
Wow..that did paint a picture...gr8 work. very descriptive...5/5 btw thnx 4 enterin my contest! |