Hey emma!! beautiful poem. it's so.... catching. like, barbed wire. it wrapped itself around my emotions and messed em up real bad. it's incredible!! you know how i like being messed up!! lOl. fabulous darling! ttyl
love suz!

Nice poem well written.5/5

Aww.. this is so sweet!! everything flowed really well. very emotional!! keep it up!! 5/5

First poem I have read of yours that was not submitted into the dark poetry section. And it was well worth the read! The ending line, fricken made my jaw drop. How you summed it up that they were together the moon and sun, when earlier in the poem you had said the moon kissed the sun good-bye. I had thought to myself that was just a very imaginative way of saying day faded into night, but it was so much more than that! I loved it. Absolutely loved it. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

I love it, it's beautiful.
I was reading back to my poem "bleeding" and saw the comment you left,like, forever ago.
And I don't know if I ever actually thanked you for that, or let you know how much it means to me.
It means a lot.
a LOT.
Thanks so much.
Great work lately....
*butterfly