Damn good!! Darien is the history master, you're following swiftly behind. I liked this read, it makes one very inquisitve. You approached this subject wonderfully. A pleasurable read.

Fantastic write about this historical figure of war Nate, really interesting to read your perception of the events. a damn fine poem but my friend...its funny you know ... my family actually owns a piece of the red barons plane...I think you did a brilliant job portraying these events through poetry...Keep up the good work
Eirisa xxoo

Very intriguing topic and a beautiful dedication to many of our war heroes that we may not speak of often but which we will never forget.
I was nevet a huge history fan but you captured my attention right up until the last stanza.