Great poem! yoru a great writier. I really liked the ending! it flowed great!
XoOx molly

Wow this is so beautifully written, and heartbreaking.
I can see perfectly the image this poem conveys, and the misery you feel for all the longing and hoping.

One thing i shall point out is that the final word should 'too', not 'to'. Other than that its amazing and not one word should ever be altered.

Well done.