Hello world
Don't you think that it is over
Now that you sleep with one eye open
All the stuff you use to trust
Has lead you the wrong way
Goodbye now
Don't you think maybe somehow
The earth is not really round
It just looks that way so they could say
That you were wrong again
(Chorus)
I reach out just grab my hand
You just just push it back
Think it's it's my attack
I help out when you want
So never that's what you got
You must have just forgotten
Just please
You've got me down on my knees
Whisper with wind the trees
Here my name am I insane
Or just thinking of life
No difference
This relaxation is to intense
Don't worry it's my expense
No need to worry about the blurry
Their wounds will heal in time
(Chorus)
I reach out just grab my hand
You just just push it back
Think it's it's my attack
I help out when you want
So never that's what you got
You must have just forgotten
Hello reaper
Are my memories real keepers
Or did I live my life in the deep end
Unaware I'm out of air
And drowning in misery
(Chorus)
I reach out just grab my hand
You just just push it back
Think it's it's my attack
I help out when you want
So never that's what you got
You must have just forgotten
Hello world
Don't you think that it is over
^In this place, "it's" seems better then it and is separated, it causes for an unnecessary pause.
Now that you sleep with one eye open
All the stuff you use to trust
Has lead you the wrong way
^Lead should be Led.
Goodbye now
Don't you think maybe somehow
The earth is not really round
It just looks that way so they could say
That you were wrong again
(Chorus)
I reach out just grab my hand
You just just push it back
Think it's it's my attack
I help out when you want
So never that's what you got
You must have just forgotten
Just please
You've got me down on my knees
Whisper with wind the trees
^I think it might sound better like so: "Whisper with the wind, the trees"
Here my name am I insane
Or just thinking of life
No difference
This relaxation is to intense
Don't worry it's my expense
No need to worry about the blurry
Their wounds will heal in time
(Chorus)
I reach out just grab my hand
You just just push it back
Think it's it's my attack
^I loved this part before, and I love it again. The way this would be sung would be wonderful. Beautifully created. :]
I help out when you want
So never that's what you got
You must have just forgotten
Hello reaper
Are my memories real keepers
Or did I live my life in the deep end
Unaware I'm out of air
And drowning in misery
(Chorus)
I reach out just grab my hand
You just just push it back
Think it's it's my attack
I help out when you want
So never that's what you got
You must have just forgotten
Simply fa nominal. I'm so intrigued by your work now. :] Amazing job. They seem to just get better and better as I go along.