Wow... that means alot to me..
great poem...

Well first of all i like your poem and it doesn't need more work it's fine and I give you a 5/5!
~*~Cindy~*~

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Awww thats so sweet i really liked i thinks its perfect and u dont need to work on it well dont be a stranger 5/5

kate

Good poem, i gave 4/5."Looser" is right the 1st part could use a little work but i think its a really aweet poem.Awesoem job!