That is a great poem!!!!!!you should read mine if you want!

"Just A Big Disaster"

Very well written
i really liked the ending
it really tied it all together and yeah, i just really liked how you worded that!~
good job!
jessie-

This poem is not bad. Good job! Keep this up! I rated 5.0 for this.

This is actually really nice not like my style but very very good you are an extremly talented writer good job