A secrets based on trust

Gosh that really explains wat i have inside me atm. i told my ex something i didnt want everyone to know but wen i dumped him for other reasons he didnt keep it a secret anymore, still i m hurting from it, tht brought tears to my eyes, i loved it keep up the work

Nice! 5/5. The emotions were captured beautifully. Thanxs for commenting on my poem :)

Whoa.
this is beautiful! especially the last two stanza's.
i loved it.
5/5
Lauren

This is a good poem, I can really relate to it. Very good job!!
*~Brittany~*

Oh wow, i love this poem, i was once close to a friend and i trusted him. just that i dont knoe what happenned.. keep it up! thanks for commenting on mine=)