by Renee Kotva May 30, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Brown eyes look at me |
Hmmm.... feels great to be stared at by gorgeous eyes, doesnt it? Well this poem shows so much love and longing, I do hope you get those brown eyes to be yours forever. Keep smiling. |
That poem was amazing and i can relate somewhat..haha. You have a real talent. Keep it up! 5/5 |
by firexflys
Nice job like how you wrote it and how deep you got in it keep it up 5.5 |