Nice job like how you wrote it and how deep you got in it keep it up 5.5

That poem was amazing and i can relate somewhat..haha. You have a real talent. Keep it up! 5/5

Hmmm.... feels great to be stared at by gorgeous eyes, doesnt it? Well this poem shows so much love and longing, I do hope you get those brown eyes to be yours forever. Keep smiling.

Love
Michelle