You`ve done it again. Utterly sublime. I`m deleying going out just to write this comment and I`ve got people waiting! Dont care, this is amazing stuff michelle, I could`nt write something like this in TWO million years. I hav`nt got long enough to give this piece the full justice it deserves with this comment but
I just want to say, amazing. Wrote it down and got it in my pocket. Going to carry it around for a few weeks and show other people. I want to know is it me or is this poem perfection. Masterful use of metophor with the sea, beaches etc. Love the lines `build my life around my dreams, like sandcastles on the shore` `thoughts flow...disappear, like changing tim` I could go on but they are revving the car outside now and I`ve got to go. Thanx for your sweet compliments in your e mail. Will reply soon as I get the time. Big hug

Well Craig...ummm...WOW. I'm so glad you liked it...it's nice to hear from friends on here that our thoughts mean something...your comments have really helped me along the past few days!! Thanks again...!!! Luv Michelle :)