Glistening Fear (Nonet)

by HOLLY ARMER   May 30, 2006


Fear
glistens
in my eyes
as your body
quakes with anger while
I watch with amazement
inhaling your shifting mood
with the eagerness of a drug
riddled addict in a dark alley

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    You have the talent to deliver a clear and powerful message in the different styles of formed poetry. Another excellent job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, awesome nonet! The flow was incredible, just rolled off my tongue from start to finish. Perfect wording and love the last line, excellent way to finish it off!

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wow! there seems no end to oyur talent, Holly! this is a completely different perspective to fear.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I loved it Holly, I always have to write about 100 words to get my point across, I admire the way you can say so much in just a few words, it speaks highly of your ability as a writer, but a human being as well. Love, Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Another great poem. i have to say that i konw i've already said this to you but i remember just less then a year ago you struggled making these types of styles and always said you got stuck. i'm happy that you've been able to do them since then. it's exciting seeing these styles come from you.

    ~Jacklyn